Renee's+Story

Step 1 murder mystery story lol!!

Characters Person 1 - bruce the 48 year old overweight social studies teacher. Person 2 - billy the 20 year old hippy living in a camper van. Person 3 - quinn a 20 year old person working at burger king. Person 4 - jane 15 years old is in bruce's class, terrified of the teacher.

Setting - the hutt

Renee

harrys part step 2 bruce gets killed by the innocent Jane while police are investigating Quinn and Billy meet up and Quinn gets Billy some BK and once the police have finished investigating Jane got away with the murder and and Quinn was sent to jail because Quinn was once beaten by Bruce and they think he wants revenge so hes in jail and Billy knows what happened but is too afraid to do anything so Jane gets angry at Billy and has a fight and the innocent Jane goes to the police and says Billy tried to rape her but the police are starting to suspect something because she is involved in alot of incidents lately

Part Three - The Story MUHAHAHAHAHAHA sidney :} = = During one of those cold winter days, the streets are empty and the roads are covered in layers of dried dead leaves. A police car breaks the silence of the quiet high street, the longest stretch of road running through the middle of Lower Hutt. The street has the busiest traffic and over the years it has witnessed many different cases of crime and accidents in its history. The police car stops at one of the many houses and after a minute of silence shouts and screams are heard throughout the neighbourhood yet nothing was heard of after this incident. Now only the street would remember that day as it is forgotten by the citizens of the Hutt Valley until one day the story is finally brought to light.

The sun has set on the hutt valley and it begins to rain, a school situated on High Street is hollow as all the students had left it a few hours ago and during this time a dark shadow stretches along the wall from the diminishing light. Old Mr. Bruce Wilbo strightens his chair as he set down his head on the table to rest after marking the test papers he had previously assesed during the day. Serving for over twenty years, the school has became his home. The floor boards creaked under the weight of the stranger as it takes sniff of the cold air, pacing down the corridor very steadily in a hypnotic rythm. The sound was disturbed as a snort came from Mr. Wilbo and the figure froze and cantinued its journey joining the chorus of the sounds coming from the two sources. As it gradually got darker and darker, soon enough there was no light throughout the grounds, the staunch figure blended into the surroundings and stopped at the room which was occupied by Mr.Wilbo. The silhouettet shifted as the huge mound of flesh surrounding the featureless teacher began to shake and began to wake up. Looking up at the shadow he was a about to shout when the the shimmer of a blade from an unkown source of light flashed across the room and slicing up the body with a peircing noise, the figure moved ran outside leaving the decapitated carcass of Mr.Wilbo lying on the table as the moon came out it cast a glow onto the knife bloodied knife.

All was quite, the ticking of the clock was a metronome echoeing itself in the room. The bell rang as students began pouring into the school, social studies being the least favourite topic for most of the students at that school no one had noticed the death of Mr. Wilbo until lunchtime. Jane screamed at the top of her lungs, she was a very common school girl but after this incident she became very popular among the students. She was ment to go for her lunchtime detention when she discovered that the body lying on the teachers desk, a stream of blood dripping onto the carpet. Her life would not have had such a drastic turn, she was one of the few students that had taken the subject and was quite the scholar at school but yet she was always afraid of the teacher. No one knows why she took the subject but people would usually ask 'why did you take that subject?' and 'what would you get out of it?" she would usually answer "i dont know" and turns away. The body was taken away for further investigation.

On the other end of the street is the newly built burger king, sitting on one of the tables is billie and quinn, best friends who used to go to the school where the aciident happened, and conicdently also one of Mr.Wilbo's ex-student. ' do you remember Mr wilbo?' billie asked curiuosly while relaxing himself after a day of hardwork ' umm, yeah ' quinn replied 'wasnt he that freaky teacher' ' yeah, remmeber how he tried beating you up that time you made fun of him ' ' ahh, now i remember, i still hate him for what he did, i didnt thought that was such a big deal ' ' well apparently ' billie said quietly ' they found him dead this morning in his own classroom' ' wow, really, i new that oneday someone would get rid of him' ' they still dont know who did it ' billie laughed well saying this ' i think he deserved what he got ' and together they laughed and joked not knowing that they were being spied on.

' latest report today on three news, after days of investigations into the brutal murder of Bruce Wilbo a school teacher his body was discovered by a fellow school girl whose name will not be diclosed, evidence has already been found and that the suspect of the case is 20 year old Quinn Killy, his thumb prints were found on the knife whch had killed the victim and reports have shown that the suspect was a previous student at the school, sources has been leaked out that Quinn had been assaulted by the victim during his years attending the school, charges will be made but Quinn states he is innocent...' the television turned off leaving the fading image of the news reporter on the black screen. A smile crept along the face as the flames flicker in the fireplace.

Jane walked slowly towards the school, running her fingers along the wall. She will have to attend the courtrooms that very same day, being the witness who dicovered the body. Being the one and only witness, Billy decided to have a chat with her because he is sure that his friend is not a murderer. ' are you stalking me ' jane said while turning around face to face with Billy ' no, i just want to talk with you ' billie replied. ' you do know it is illegal to lie to the judge ' jane said coldly after a while of talking ' and you do know that i cant do much about what had happened, i am just a witness who discovered the body, not much can be done about it '. ' wait! ' billie shouted and pulled hard on her arm, it was very firm and as billie wondered Jane kicked him from the back of her foot throwing him into a flower bed. Jane started running away and as she dodged a stray cat and her key fell out, Jane not noticing kept on going but billie saw it glimmering in the sun and pocketed it.

Late at night on the day he had off, billie decided to visit Jane, not knowing why he began by observing the street and seeing if he could see her walking by. Just his luck, he saw Jane getting into the front yard and dicarding a bag into a hole. She quickly ran back in. Seeing what he saw, he crept up to the driveway and made sure that Jane couldn't see him. Billie rummaged through the garden and found the bag, he quickly opened and found nothing but food scraps, he was about to leave but something hit his head.

' Good evening billie, i see you have been intruding into my house ' talking to the crumpled heap of billie on the floor '. ' what are you doing, why did you hurt me ' billie said innocently ' no, why are you doing this to me ' jane said to him ' i thought you have given up but i guess i have no choice, i might as well tell you the truth ' ' oh yes and i see you have came here to return my keys ' she said while tinkling them ' thank you very much, and now i shall begin '. ' my family as been living on this street for a very long time ' she began ' and my mum used to live in this very house, yes i know, still looks the same after many years ' she paused took a breathe and continued ' and do you know what more is there to this house, my mum died here, i was there when it happened, my next door neighbour always go home drunk, once he was more drunk than ever. He went into the wrong house believe it or not and went into our one instead, i was really scared and so did my mum, she tried to protect and put me in the pantry, where i could see everything through the cracks. That drunken man was running through the house tearing everything apart, chasing after my mother. After that guess what he did, he raped her, i guess it must have been out of his dreams to find a women in his house, my house, our house. After that my mum thought she could have ran for it, under the weight of that drunkey i am sure that no one could not suffocate under him. My mum was screaming wanting to leave but then she was crushed and she injured internally ' Jane said now with tears in her eyes ' and do you know who did this, yes of course it was no other than Mr. Bruce Wilbo, i cant believe i can still call him by his full name after so many years in his class, i was waiting, i was observing him day after day and then i had my chance, i guess it was only fair if it was a life for a life isnt it ? ' she asked billie. ' but why did you have to drag Quinn into this, he didnt do anything to you ' Billie said struggling to sit up. 'well i guess i had no choice, i dont think it would be fair if i got in jail and believe it or not Quinn isnt that clean either and i am sure that for your own safety you should stay away from him. ' Jane said ' well i think it is time the pills kicks in '. ' what pills ' billie asked her. ' there is no point to tell you anyway but i guess i should untie you now. ' when jane untied billie, he wanted to fight back but then he just fell back down to the same crumpled heap as before. ' i cant believe it could be this easy ' jane said ' i guess now it is time for my bit of the show '.

' This morning on three news, the witness to the latest murder in the quiet Hutt Valley has been found raped this morning in her house. Her name will not be disclosed but we do have some information that the raper was a friend to the suspect and is now also facing charges. She was found undressed shocked in bed. The raper was kicking and screaming when the police arrived for investigation. No further investigation is needed for this case...'