Luke's+Story

A Theif's Story

Character 1: Drewy Hectart - Is extremely OBESE - bed bound, has lots of bald spots. sits on his king size bed all day in his 2 story house and he is stuck up stairs. has a tv - he watches the food channel (haha), has a wife.

Character 2: Matilda Hectart - Is also Extremely MORBIDLY OBESE but very very rich - likes to work from her computer in her bed.

Character 3: Mr Rectard - a thief who steals form fat people's rich houses because he know's they cant chase after a fit young athlete like Mr Rectard.

Setting(s): The Hectarts house and the Police station

Mr Rectard found the site for The Hectarts house which is enormously huge. Mr Rectard goes to the Hectard's House to steal all of his money. But he didnt know where the huge chamber was in their enormous house which held all of the Hectards family Money, unfortunatly The Hectards do not know what is going on because Drewy hectard And Matilda Hectard Are both asleep. my Rectrad had no idea that he had a son who was 14 he was muscly and would run like usain bolt (jamaican) rectard Had woken him up when walking in and knocking every thing over. Rectard is now caught by the muscly aon of the Hectards parents.


 * Step 3**

It was a nice warm evening perfect for a theif to steal from a giant house. This house just happened to be the Hectard family home. The Hectard family home was a perfect target for a theif because it just so happens that Mr and Mrs Hectard are both morbidly obease. They are both bed bound and even if they tried to walk they couldn't because they have been in bed for the last 10 years. all they do is watch the food channel, work on thier multi-million dollar companie of fast-food resturants from thier bed and play video games. The Hectards don't believe in the banking system so they keep all thier millions of dollars stached away in thier safe under the kitchen tap, so as you can see they are the perfect target for a robbery.

That night Mr Rectard a world-famous spy/thief was in the neighbourhood and saw from across the street an extremly nice 2 storey house with a couple of fat people lying in a king-sized bed in thier bed room playing video games. He thought he would take the oppitunity and go and get some extra cash because he had some rather large bills to pay off and money was tight. So Mr Rectard sneaked across the road and onto the lawn. It just so happened that a big window on the bottom floor was open, he couldn't believe his luck everything was going perfectly. As he stumbled through the window he noticed the bid red safe under the kitchen sink. Watching for an alarm system he made his way over to the kitchen. Another stroke of luck, there wasn't an alarm guarding this house, it was like a dream come true. Mr Rectard opened the safe with ease with his great skills at lock picking. He couldn't beleive his eyes, there was approximetly 3.5 million dollars all in 100 dollar notes stacked up. He quickly filled up his huge money sack with the cash. Then suddenly he heard a noise coming towards him and it wasn't the sounds from the tv. Then a boy wwalked into the kitchen craving a drink of milk. Mr Rectard froze for a second then bolteed out the kitchen and jumped through a glass window onto the lawn, he started sprinting away down the street. The boy who just happened to be The e Hectards 14 year old son David quickly dialled 111 then ran after the theif. Nobody had any idea that David was one of the quickest runners in the world, almost as fast as olympic gold-medalist Usain Bolt. David caught Mr Rectard in a matter of seconds. Mr Rectard was thrown to the ground just as the police car came around the corner. The police raced out of the car and pinned Mr Rectard on the road with a gun to his neck yelling "FREEZE, FREZZE " then handcuffing his two hands behind his back. The bag of money was lying on the ground until David grabbed it. David took the huge bag of cash back to the house and carefully placed it back in the safe locking it afterwards. Mr Rectard was in the police car waiting to be taken to the station. Back at the station David told the officers the whole story about the robbery and how he caught Mr Rectard. The police were amazed at the story and congradulated David on his bravness. Mr Rectard was given 4 years in jail for the crime and David got a medal for being the hero. This all happended without The Hectards having a clue what was going on, they were still up in their room playing video games.

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