Josh's+Story

M.U.P- Mupis a street bum living on the street and hangs out at the BNZ BOB- bob is a bank Teller at the BNZ and has an ugly mono brow Piet- Piet is the BNZ manager and is obese from only eating Donuts Maiki- is a anorexic model for Kelvin Klein and is 17

Setting: The streets, Lower Hutt Mupis comes into the bank and tells everyone to get on the floor. Mupis goes up to bob the accountant gets him to give the key to have access to all the money. Piet the manager comes and Mupis gets angry and shoots Piet. Maiki the anorexic model stands up and reaches for the phone before he does Mupis shoots him. The police are on their way because some dude called them and after ten minutes there is a whole commotion going on.  Mary  It was a fine day in Lower Hutt; Mupis was hanging out on the streets outside BNZ as he always does. Bob comes outside for a cigarette whilst talking on his mobile phone. He overhears Bob talking about no one having broken into the bank since it was built, in overhearing this, an idea forms in Mupis’s head. Mupis starts to take action on this idea going to one of his friend’s house that has firearms available for use. Mupis borrows one of these guns and makes his way back to the bank. Mupis walks into the bank to do this mission, he tells everyone to get on the floor. Once Mupis is in control of the people he walks up to Bob the bank teller and tells him to hand over the key to have access to the money safes. Bob hands over the key for mercy. Mupis was on his way to get the money when Piet the boss came out of his office following behind him was Maiki who was setting up an account to hold all his money that he earned from modeling. When Piet told Mupis to settle down and surrender when Mupis shot him. Maiki ran to save himself, as any model would do, however in his leaving he reached for the phone to call police when he also got shot by Mupis. Mupis was now pleased with himself for he had completed his mission. He thought, until, the police showed up firearms in hand and aiming right at Mupis. Mupis wouldn't give in though, not after everything he had gone through for this money. He decided to go against the police officers word and started shooting around. Luckily no one was killed during this moment however many were injured innocent bystanders were shot also. By this time there was a huge riot people were running, crying, screaming, and on their phones trying to keep people out of the area. This was a big event for the little city of Lower Hutt as nothing had happened like it before! Mupis was still in the building refusing to give in when police finally had got through the back door and slowly and quietly evacuated people out of the building before Mupis went crazy. Mupis at this moment in time was feeling the Adrenaline going through him and decided to make it worse he started to shoot at police. Finally a police officer who was brave enough went inside, crept up behind him and tackled the offender in his acts. He was then held in custody over night waiting for his emergency court case to take place the following day! The evening of this day went down undisturbed for the people of Lower Hutt were settled and over this great big fuss.
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