jamie's+story+step+5

It was a great day for some lucky people in the town of Kazakstan as a total of forty five million dollars was being cashed in to the Lotto Headquarters. Emma, a good business woman, had won the first division prize worth a whooping thirty million dollars. The second division prize went to Maiki who was a very successful Jockey underwear model. He won a million dollars. The whole city of Kazakstan found out about the great news.

Since the city found about the news, a lot of people were after them but not as much as a woman called Beckz. Beckz is number one in the world for playing squash, but she does not get payed for all the effort she puts in. So beckz felt that she deserved the money alot more. It was saturday 20th of October and it was the day that Emma and Maiki were going to cash in their ticket.....

As Emma slowly reached the counter with a smile from ear to ear she put the ticket on the counter. Out of no were Beckz comes running in and stabs Emma rite in the ribs. Blood starts pouring out, as Beckz keeps running staight out the door. A man called Sam saw the whole thing and started running straight after Beckz.

While that was happening Maiki sneakly swapped the ticket so he could get the 30 million dollars not even caring that Emma was dying. Mean while Sam was trying to find Beckz but unfortunatly she got away. As Sam was trying to cross the road his foot got stuck in some wet tar and out of no where a roller comes a long and wipes out sam and all you can see is his head lying in the middle of the road with blood spiting out. 1 hour later the cops came and tried to restore order to the situation. It was to late as Emma had sadly past away. Maiki got caught trying to swap the ticket so he was stripped of his money and his modeling career.

Maiki and Beckz decide they needed a fresh start some where new coincidinly the both decide Kamuchea and meet up on the same plane. Everyone reconise them and started freaking out as they are wanted all over Kazakstan. They all ran around like crazy chickens all the disturbance created problems with the plane and all of a sudden the plane starts falling like a man doing a bungy jump. Bang, crash. boom the plane hits the ground with such force that the plane is in a million peices. There were no survives. In conclusion everyone that was involed in the maddeness was tradically killed. It proved that people will do anything for money.

By Maiki

Step 5 by Emma:

It was a great day for some lucky people in the town of Kazakstan as a total of forty five million dollars was being cashed in to the Lotto Headquarters. Emma, a good business woman, had won the first division prize worth a whooping thirty million dollars. The second division prize went to Maiki who was a very successful Jockey underwear model. He had won a million dollars, and the whole city of Kazakstan found out about this great news.

Since the city had found about the news a lot of people were after them, but not as much as a woman called Beckz. Beckz is number one in the world for playing squash, but she does not get payed for all the effort she puts in. So beckz felt that she deserved the money a lot more than Emma and Maiki. It was Saturday the twentieth of October and it was the day that Emma and Maiki were going to cash in their ticket...

Emma walked up and slowly reached the counter and with a smile from ear to ear she put the ticket on the counter. Suddenly, out of nowhere, Beckz came running in and stabbed Emma right in the ribs. Blood started to pour out, but Beckz kept running until she ran straight out of the door. A man called Sam witnessed the whole thing and started running after Beckz.

Whilst that was happening, Maiki had sneakily swapped his ticket for Emma's so he could get the thirty million dollars for himself. He did not even care that Emma was dying.

Meanwhile Sam was trying to chase after Beckz, but unfortunately she was too fast for him and she got away. As Sam was trying to cross the road his foot got stuck in some wet tar, and suddenly out of nowhere a roller came along and wiped out Sam. All his remains was just his head lying in the middle of the road with blood spurting out.

An hour later the cops came and tried to restore order to the situation, but it was too late as Emma had sadly past away. Maiki had got caught on camera trying to swap the ticket and so he was stripped of his money and his modelling career.

Maiki and Beckz decided that they needed a fresh start somewhere new. By a strange coincidence, they both decide to start new in Kamuchea and meet up on the same plane. Everyone reconised them from the incident in Kazakstan and started freaking out as they are wanted with a price on both of their heads in Kazakstan. The people on the plane ran around like crazy chickens trying to capture Maiki and Emma. All this disturbance created problems with the plane, and the plane lost control of its steering. It started to fall quickly, like a person doing a bungy jump.

Bang! Crash! Boom! The plane hit the ground with such force that it shattered into a million pieces! Unfortunately there were no survivors. In conclusion, everyone that was involved in the madness of the incident in Kazakhstan was tragically killed. It proved that people will do anything for money.